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jeanne
05-25-2007, 04:46 AM
Hi everyone - I thought it would be fun to have a haiku thread, for some reason I've been experimenting with the form for a couple of weeks...here's one to get us started! I'm making no claims that it's great or even good, but I've been having fun writing them... :)

My heart, at your feet
My body, yours to command
My soul, in your hands

Have a wonderful day!

^firefly^
05-25-2007, 07:16 AM
Ohhh yay! I'm glad you made this thread his_j...though as I warned, I have no intention of burdening you all with my terrible attempts at haiku.

I loved yours, though...I hope you get some more contributions to your thread!

anonymouse
05-25-2007, 04:18 PM
I'm thinking of you
As I write you this haiku
For something to do

anonymouse
05-25-2007, 05:07 PM
My one thousandth post
Is this one here in haiku
Woo! Woo! Woo! Woo! Woo!

jeanne
05-26-2007, 07:18 AM
anonymouse

Yea! That is so adorable! Thanks for contributing - it will prevent me from burdening ya'll with my terrible attempts on a daily basis (I'll try to limit it to weekly...) LOL

firefly

Yours can't be worse than mine, believe me! Go ahead and post away, this is just for fun anyhow!

jeanne
05-30-2007, 06:07 AM
Okay, another trite haiku:

What do you want now?
More, harder, longer, meaner
Don't stop, never stop.

gagged_Louise
05-30-2007, 06:30 AM
Learning and bending
to more harsh, crazy commands
- slave finding her place.

jeanne
05-30-2007, 06:56 AM
Yeah! Thanks, louise, I like that. "- slave finding her place" yum!

Rhabbi
05-30-2007, 09:49 AM
My one thousandth post
Is this one here in haiku
Woo! Woo! Woo! Woo! Woo!

Congratulations anonymouse, and neat haiku also.