Lonely Puppet
05-26-2007, 06:10 PM
Hey, just letting it be known that my second attempt at erotica, "Tourist Trap", is up. I used input from my previous story to help with this one. Enjoy!
retsam6
05-27-2007, 09:43 PM
enjoyed 'tourist trap' esp the setting of Japan.. one of my favorite countries. Keep up the work!
Hi Loney Puppet,
I liked the femdom, and her attitude toward subs, and found how she treated the sub hot.
But the torture sequences were too , wham-bang, done. I would have liked more plot rather than just moving off to a different type of torture.
Post a notice when the next is up