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Eponine
06-01-2007, 02:28 PM
You wanted me to worship You
Drown You, Saturate You,
Flood You, Inundate You
With eternal adoration.
What a grand exploration, what a perfect collaboration.
But unnoticed was resistance to Your life's redecoration-
What started as mere discoloration, in a flash, was my deportation.
And neither desperation nor crying exhortations
Will bring about this joy's regeneration.

Your demands were met by me
Loving You, Admiring You,
Revering You, Inspiring You
Submerging O/ourselves in thoughts of forever-
Oh, what an untrustworthy endeavor.
Not seeing just around the corner was never-
Not knowing so soon W/we would be severed.
So tearfully wrong W/we were, my Love, however.
So sad W/we could not have been more clever
To recognize that fate would pull down the lever.

tessa
06-01-2007, 04:41 PM
~hugs~

Pertez
06-02-2007, 06:54 AM
.......~speechless~ Great writing

Guest91408
06-02-2007, 11:22 AM
My my...truly heartfelt writing. Excellent.