Dark Embrace

[DarkSister]

Ok firstly I just have to say that I am no poet, I find it such a difficult medium to work in… perhaps it’s the need to be concise which I oh so rarely am… but I have written this with a need to do so, a prose wrought through emotion and something deeper…


Dark Embrace

Lost to the darkness, its cold surround,
To face this Abyss forever I’m bound…
I close my eyes and still my breath,
Await the cold ice creep of death…

The shadows are home to sorrow and fear,
My mind sparks; I’m not alone here…
I fear to turn, I fear to move,
Yet I feel a touch my pain to soothe…

Comfort bought by whispered word,
Her restful voice is all I heard…
Release my hold on life so vain,
Her soft touch drinks away my pain…

Her teeth against my neck caress,
My desires for her I no longer suppress…
A sudden pain, the warmth of blood,
In my love for her my senses flood…

Silence now, my old life done,
My soul renewed, my deep pain has gone…
My sweet vampire, her embrace so tight,
In the Darkness she is my light…

[tessa]

I am completely captivated by your words. They pull me in and hold me still.

No matter what you consider yourself to be, you write from your soul. And it is incredibly beautiful.

For sharing...my thanks.

tessa :wave:

[Guest91408]

Thank you darling, this was wonderful. You are always able to bring tears to my eyes like no other.

I feel your embrace. I hope you feel my teeth...I love you, each and every day your grip on my heart strengthens. I see no future other than that with you.

Pain XxX

[DarkSister]

You always bring that crushing pleasurable ache to my heart darling… and I know that you understand that which lies behind the words and what they represent to you, to us both…

I feel your teeth, your touch, your deepest darkest love… you are my future, and you know that without you I would have none…

Dark xXx

[DarkSister]

No matter what you consider yourself to be, you write from your soul.


Thanks for your kind words tessa... i truly appreciate your comments and your understanding

Dark xXx

[Rhabbi]

Poetry is about expressing yourself, and you are a poet.

[DarkSister]

Thanks Rhabbi... so sweet for you to comment

[gagged_Louise]

Intriguing one, Dark, and though I'm just beginning to know you I can see it captiures something of your love and need for each other.