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thrall
06-27-2007, 06:41 AM
Awash in memories
Darkness found
Bleeds the thoughts
And pain abounds
Lost in sorrow
Lost in grief
The heart is open
For all who seek
Some souls pass
Some collide
Forever eternal
Forever entwined
Divine solace
Will come again
As the universe spins
So galaxies combine
Rhabbi
06-27-2007, 09:26 AM
Interesting juxtaposition of images, and an apt descritption of life.
Sir_G
06-27-2007, 06:17 PM
Some souls pass
Some collide
Forever eternal
Forever entwined
The mystery of life and relationships captured in a verse. An amazing and insightful poem thrall. Your work screams of your intellect and depth of feeling. A definite pleasure to read.
Warbaby1943
06-29-2007, 02:23 AM
thrall very nice
tessa
06-29-2007, 05:55 AM
Your words are a deeply felt experience, thrall. Just incredible.
And exactly what Sir G said. Just like that.
~hugs~
tessa :wave:
gagged_Louise
07-06-2007, 12:49 AM
great images, thrall
Lord Hemloc
07-23-2007, 12:30 PM
From the shadows I applaude your thoughts in this poem
A good poem is never thought out but flows from the soul like a river.
Your river is raging and flowing very well...
Lord Hemloc
thrall
07-23-2007, 09:55 PM
thank you..........
from you, this is high praise.......
angelic.zest
08-20-2007, 08:48 PM
very nice
Whippett
02-13-2008, 02:44 PM
;rose; words are inadequate for what you made me feel
craven
08-03-2008, 09:59 PM
wonderful words, how you say so so much with so little baffles me still, love it
thanks for sharing