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thrall
07-02-2007, 07:18 AM
Alone in the darkness
Forever it seems
With feeling so much
Only wanting to please
Never untouched
The soul will wonder
Into the darkest hell
Where we all seem to wonder
gagged_Louise
07-02-2007, 09:24 AM
Good one thrall, though I hope "darkest Hell" is not where your dream and hopes are located.
isabeau6
07-03-2007, 09:19 AM
Good one thrall, though I hope "darkest Hell" is not where your dream and hopes are located.
i echo those sentiments...still this reaches into my soul as well....good poetry tends to do that..
Rhabbi
07-05-2007, 11:52 AM
Very nice thrall
Warbaby1943
07-05-2007, 10:36 PM
Alone???? Never
tessa
07-06-2007, 08:22 AM
I've been there in that "Alone".
~hugs~
tessa
Whippett
02-14-2008, 06:25 PM
a dark so deep it glistens
on the path
that falls away.
It takes a heart that listens
to the cry
as silence bleeds.
Takes hold, and rises, shining
in the darkness
of the day.