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thrall
07-07-2007, 01:09 PM
Languishing in a life unbidden
Lusting for desires unattained
Sorrow fills the soul...
Rhabbi
07-07-2007, 01:18 PM
nice work thrall. needs some polish but very nice.
tessa
07-07-2007, 03:28 PM
thrall, if this poem of yours was any shinier, I'd be blinded. Close enough to it already. :)
~hugs~
tessa :wave:
Warbaby1943
07-09-2007, 02:14 AM
Hope you are finding what was lacking and sorrows are gone.
Forced to be alone in a life unbidden, mustn't sorrow always be our companion. Must not we always have a companion, whether that companion is someone to talk to, or sorrow we do not have someone to talk to. For we will have one or the other.
And when the companion is sorrow, don't the "desires unattained" whip us on to exchange companions?
That is a crafty little trap God has placed us in.