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John56{vg}
07-11-2007, 07:02 PM
Tentative and Tight
we gaze into each other's eyes,
fear threatening to tear the
fragile curtain connecting us.

The spontaneity of our time together
has evolved into this planned and
premeditated meeting.

Would it change the feeling
between us?
Could we still alolow it to flow and become?
Would the thin sheet of guaze
joining us survive?

But as my eyes search your soul
as we alwys have done,
I see the willingness to the the risk
at your touch.

The electricity of that touch

JOLTS

and the fear is torn away
And
the curtain comes alive.

As I touch you and you touch me,
Our guaze curtain becomes strong as steel but
gentle and soft as lace

As the strength of the passion grow,
So my own strength
grows and suddenly
I am Hercules
I am Samson
I am Achilles and

I am Oddysseus on a
Journey through and around your
body,
around the cape of your heart
and down into the verdant depths of your soul.

I meet you on an equal plain
and we share one another
like children playing in
a secret graden of
heavenly ddelights.

We linger
the passion
waxing and
waning

we bath the lusty sweat from our bodies.

And soon I am watching you sleep.
I hold you as I look longingly art your
closed eyes as you sleep.
and listen to your meloodious
night sounds and sighs.

In your sleep
you pull me over to cover you and
I wrap myself around you,
becoming your comforter.

Somewhere in the night
I catch your sleep-drenched eyes
lock into mine.
Wondering in their slumber

If I am for real.

If we are for real

If this night is for real.

Your eyes close as I
continue to stare and

I weep and whisper softly.

"Tonight is all the reality there is
and ever will be."

Time has stopped
and with all my will I try to hold back

Time
and
Tears.

I wrap you in my body
once again and hold tight
until morning comes

Proving that my powers notwithstanding
I cannot keep the world from turning.

This moment
this night of love, lust and lounging is

Over.

But the taste of the morning
as you wake to my caresses
as we again embrace.

This moment
will
continue.

thrall
07-11-2007, 07:46 PM
WOW

this is wonderful........i cant wait for more

i love it , John. Thanks for shareing

Thrall

violet girl{MM}
07-11-2007, 07:54 PM
i agree with thralll...very passionate and moving. A lovely piece! Robert Frost beware!! ;)

tessa
07-11-2007, 07:57 PM
John...

~looks at you and smiles in wondrous awe~

Your poem is stunning.

For all that beauty, I thank you.

tessa

John56{vg}
07-11-2007, 08:04 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful words, I will post more tonight. this is an old poem.

And the opinion of you three beauties count the most to me my dears. A big part of my cluster of friends.


Love to all three and kisses around the thread.

John

Rhabbi
07-12-2007, 10:17 AM
Very nice John

John56{vg}
07-13-2007, 05:26 AM
Thanks Rhabbi for the good words :) . They are appreciated.

jeanne
07-13-2007, 05:30 AM
That's just beautiful - thanks for sharing, John!

bad_kitty_77
07-26-2007, 01:06 AM
Breathtaking Master...

John56{vg}
07-26-2007, 02:37 AM
Thank you my sweet cat