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Darkmagi
07-16-2007, 04:13 PM
Take off that dress, I'd hate to tear the silk
And unfurl those stockings, I don't want a ladder
Let me release your bosom, I desire to stroke them
Slowly remove those knickers as I embrace your lips
With your naked body shivering, I hold you tight
For a few moments I provide that warmth
I then step back and you shudder from the cold
I lift the palm to your delicate yet chilled hand
I usher you to the frame, wrists are slotted in
I place your neck in the collar locking in tight
I secure your ankles as your shivering gets louder
I take crop, steady hand and begin to ignite you

Rhabbi
07-17-2007, 11:14 AM
Nice work.

tessa
07-17-2007, 04:24 PM
That last line..."I take crop, steady hand and begin to ignite you"...that is inspired!

Thank you for sharing.

tessa :wave:

jeanne
07-17-2007, 09:02 PM
That last line..."I take crop, steady hand and begin to ignite you"...that is inspired!


tessa :wave:

Before I read tessa's post I was thinking the same thing - a little shiver went right down my spine - then another when I realized once again that tessa and I think alike... :)

jeanne

slaveangel{HM}
07-18-2007, 02:26 AM
I adore this poem so much.

moptop
07-18-2007, 06:18 AM
Wow... yes, the coldness of the passion is superb. I'd be there...

Entice{MrW}
07-18-2007, 07:07 AM
love it Darkmagi, ty :)