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Ifallwillfall
07-19-2007, 09:10 PM
Walking alone on these cold empty streets,
My thoughts follow in my wake.
Wandering, drifting,
Never standing still.

Looking out through this wire fence,
I see what little world i know.
Loud and dirty,
I call it my home.
Even if it may not agree.

My thoughts call to me,
Reminding me of my aching heart.
Never letting me rest,
Lest i could possibly forget.

And what of these rickety wooden steps?
Giving in to these leaden thoughts i carry.
Broken i will lie,
Not to be found for many a day.

Somewhere i know,
My feelings are shared.
But all i can ask,
Is it who i want it to be?

Pertez
07-19-2007, 11:22 PM
Wow Fantastic Thank you :rose: :rose:

tessa
07-20-2007, 07:09 AM
A beautiful glimpse into a desolate place.

My thanks to you for sharing.

tessa :wave:

Rhabbi
07-20-2007, 09:10 AM
Very nice, thank you.

Ifallwillfall
07-20-2007, 09:20 AM
Very nice, thank you.

Why am i thanked,
When my heart aches?
Trapped in this place,
Only words can guide you.

WyldWyl
07-21-2007, 07:24 PM
A strong sense of isolation you've created. A fine piece of work.

LifesThread
08-29-2007, 06:17 PM
Very deep. Its a shame this person was banned. Wonder why?

nk_lion
09-06-2007, 09:48 PM
Very deep. Its a shame this person was banned. Wonder why?

Most probably because he broke a forum rule, if not, because he did something really stupid, or probably both