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snowflake
07-21-2007, 08:12 PM
Coldness and darkness,
loneliness and helplessness.
Tiredness and sleepless,
fearless and unwantedness

Tears try to fill my eyes,
but the stream forever dries.

Screams try to desperately escape,
mouth closed with invisible tape.

Heart fills with pain and despair,
To tell anyone you don't dare.

Overwhelming feeling of unloved,
pushed away and shoved.

Self-worth, love and values lack,
pain, emptiness, stab you back.

It's to late, all over now for me,
i just wish before, i was smart enough to see.

hugs
snowflake

WyldWyl
07-21-2007, 08:17 PM
Powerful, heartfelt, beautiful. But you are not unloved.

Rhabbi
07-22-2007, 02:46 PM
Another beautiful poem

John56{vg}
07-23-2007, 08:33 AM
Powerful lovely snowflake, powerful


John

tessa
07-23-2007, 08:39 AM
~hugs snowflake~

tessa

The Tester`
08-18-2007, 12:03 AM
Excelent writing Snowflake... Well done...

Much thanks and Love...

angelic.zest
08-20-2007, 07:48 PM
thanks for sharing, really enjoyed it! *hugs*

snowflake
08-26-2007, 03:03 PM
Thank you all for your words... You are all so kind...

a bad day and bad night,
True feelings darkens my sight.

Hugs