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thrall
07-30-2007, 09:19 PM
I wait in shadows
Listening for your voice
Words to stir my soul

The sunrise breaks
The dawn of day
I bask in His light

The pleasure of his voice
The bridge to his soul
Let me feel your world

Delicate as lace, strong as steel
I wait to hear your voice
I wait, My Master, I wait.



love

Thrall

retsam6
07-31-2007, 04:18 AM
the only thing wrong with this poem is......................you misspelled your own name

Warbaby1943
07-31-2007, 09:38 AM
I see no mistakes and I love your words again.

Rhabbi
07-31-2007, 10:06 AM
Damn thrall. This is another poem that reaches out and grabs me. This one yanked my gut. Thank you.

Phantom
07-31-2007, 11:24 AM
My thrall,

Thank you for the sweet comments about my voice. I wish I had the words to express that as you do.

thrall
07-31-2007, 03:59 PM
I wait...............

angelic.zest
08-20-2007, 08:06 PM
beautiful!