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thrall
08-25-2007, 07:00 AM
Within the darkness
I see the two dawns
The darkness in the light
The light through the dark

Reach for me, hold me
Save me from the void
I hear the sirens call in the darkness
I hear the voice of the light

A vortex of the spinning
The eye of the hurricane
Center of peace
Within the chaos of the storm

John56{vg}
08-25-2007, 07:25 AM
My beautiful friend! Lovely as always. This is one of the best.

jeanne
08-25-2007, 07:29 AM
thrall, very nice. Thanks!

Rhabbi
08-25-2007, 09:56 AM
Very nice thrall. Again my thanks.

gumby
08-25-2007, 01:25 PM
Very nice thrall.

snowflake
08-26-2007, 04:47 PM
Very Nice thankyou Thrall

hugs

thrall
08-26-2007, 07:45 PM
thanks everyone im so glad you like it

Warbaby1943
08-27-2007, 12:30 PM
Again thrall you are amazing. Your use of words is unique. The mold was broken after you my friend.

princess_of_pain
08-27-2007, 07:23 PM
A vortex of the spinning
The eye of the hurricane
Center of peace
Within the chaos of the storm

Evocative and beautiful

Whippett
02-01-2008, 07:33 PM
I've been searching for the right words - and I think I have them - at least for me...

Whisperer in the darkness - you are the green thunder of the dusk - silent and reverbrent at once