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princess_of_pain
08-27-2007, 10:59 AM
The honey was thick --
oozing across the afternoon baked cement,
shards of shattered glass
littered the heavy, bubble-filled syrup.
My father’s face
molted with purple anger, square jaw clenched;
there I was,
bent over the seat of his ‘73 Chevy truck
(“Betsy Blue Eyes”)
with the skirt of my plaid jumper pulled up around my hips.
His hand
slamming against my body; on display for the whole neighborhood
My face
hot with humiliation as I tried to avoid the sticky liquid gold.
I remember, I see
my small, Ked-shod foot, knocking over the 40 oz. jar,
even though today,
my father swears it wasn’t my fault.


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moptop
08-27-2007, 11:27 AM
Nice one princess - or kink - I don't know what to call you! pok, perhaps. Hell of a way to get stuck on spanking. Reminds me uncomfortably of one of H Dean's story contest entries!!

princess_of_pain
08-27-2007, 11:41 AM
LOL Thank you moptop! Actually, I'm hoping to get my user name changed to "princess_of_pain," so go ahead and call me "Pop." :D

Rhabbi
08-27-2007, 11:59 AM
Well written poem princess.

princess_of_pain
08-27-2007, 01:10 PM
Thank you Rhabbi! :)

snowflake
08-28-2007, 03:41 PM
very nice princess

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princess_of_pain
08-28-2007, 06:46 PM
Thank you snowlfake :) *Hugs back*

Alex Bragi
08-29-2007, 12:09 AM
Mmm...To me, this kind of reads like something Pam Aires might write, only with a good dose of kink. *ss* I like it!

princess_of_pain
08-29-2007, 12:28 AM
LOL Ironically, I totally missed the kink factor until after I'd posted the poem. Geez, I can be a true bubble head sometimes. I'm glad you like it Alex.

Alex Bragi
08-29-2007, 02:35 AM
LOL Ironically, I totally missed the kink factor until after I'd posted the poem. Geez, I can be a true bubble head sometimes. I'm glad you like it Alex.


*gg* I just realised this is in the "non-erotic" section. Hey, maybe it's me? Or, maybe this place has turned me into a fully fledged pervert! *gg*