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Guest 91108
09-09-2007, 02:14 AM
Loss

When one loves so much
They have to let go,
For the pain of it
Is driving them mad.
When their thoughts are
No longer sane and they fear
Letting others know their mind,
When they give their word and
Can no longer uphold it …
The sense of pain and loss
Of a friend, nay , a companion,
Set free as a dove to fly even higher…
The emptiness , the loss is overwhelming.
The mourning is lasting…
Sensations and thoughts all smear together….
Loss of something which had so much value
So much meaning … leaving such a void
That will never be filled.
Loss is the worst of outcomes.
The most devastating of all things comparable to a death..
Death of a part of you
you had to let go and strive onward at a crawl..
The words fade.
Life’s color fades.
Where is there meaning in such times?
Makes one feel there is only illusion.
Reality is if you do not have loss you have never had.

Pertez
09-09-2007, 02:48 AM
WoW WolfScout That was Absolutly Great Thank you SO much i Love it

Guest 91108
09-09-2007, 02:51 AM
thank you, Pertez

pixie
09-09-2007, 05:52 AM
incredibly moving

Guest 91108
09-09-2007, 06:00 AM
thank you pixie.

suchaminx
09-09-2007, 06:18 AM
*Just hugs for the Wolf*

Guest 91108
09-09-2007, 08:08 AM
Thanks, minxy {hugs} back.

slaveangel{HM}
09-10-2007, 03:29 AM
Reality is if you do not have loss you have never had.

Very important line that. I hope you do remember this as the days pass during this hard time. Remember what you did have, treasure it always. *hug*

Guest 91108
09-10-2007, 04:52 AM
Thank you angel. *hug back*.

thrall
09-10-2007, 07:21 AM
you reduce me to tears...........



.........to feel life, you must feel the pain. ..........to have the light you must have the darkness.

Rhabbi
09-10-2007, 08:01 AM
Great poem WS. Just remember, sometimes letting go is the best you can do for another.

Guest 91108
09-10-2007, 08:31 AM
Thank you thrall. Rhabbi.

cariad
09-10-2007, 02:55 PM
*reaching out to hold the hand of a friend who sees darkness*

cariad

thrall
09-10-2007, 04:07 PM
because i live in the darkness with you..........Hugs

Guest 91108
09-10-2007, 07:36 PM
Thrall my location has always said in the darkness until recently.
but before.. in the darkness I knew my way.
I know longer know my way as I cannot see the way.