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thrall
09-12-2007, 02:23 PM
The warm breath of life, joy in the passion
A gift given and received, beauty in the dawn
Love, I bleed.

The cold hands of darkness caress me, sorrowful pain in the passion
I feel the chill of the coming darkness
Love, I bleed.

Wounds given, wounds received,
Wounds unforgiving, destruction achieved
Love, I bleed.

How do you staunch the flow of blood?
How do you stop the river of tears?
Love, I bleed.

Do you stay in the light, feeling unbearable pain?
Do you seek solace within the darkness, unfeeling peace?
Love, I bleed.

I will always love you, I will always feel you within my soul
I will always feel the joy and the pain
I am crushed

Love, I bleed

Rhabbi
09-12-2007, 02:29 PM
This is beautiful thrall. Life is in the blood.

rach
09-12-2007, 02:33 PM
thrall wrote:
I will always love you, I will always feel you within my soul
I will always feel the joy and the pain
I am crushed

Love, I bleed

Love the whole poem, but this part especially speaks to me. Beautiful

John56{vg}
09-12-2007, 02:36 PM
Beautiful friend Thrall this is sad and full of feeling, an amazing effort from an amzing and talented poetess.

I love to hear your work, but I hug you to me for your sadness.

thrall
09-13-2007, 09:23 AM
thanks

Pertez
09-13-2007, 09:27 AM
I Love it many thanks Thrall :rose: :rose: :rose:

thrall
09-20-2007, 11:34 AM
thanks Pertez

Warbaby1943
09-20-2007, 01:11 PM
Very, very lovely thrall.

snowflake
09-22-2007, 04:12 PM
Very beautiful. but very sad..

Thankyou for sharing thrall..

hugs
snow

Isabelle90
01-11-2008, 08:07 PM
These words spoke volumes to me!!! How appropriate....

Once again, I need to experience it to get it. Thank you, Thrall!!!

thrall
01-11-2008, 09:15 PM
These words spoke volumes to me!!! How appropriate....

Once again, I need to experience it to get it. Thank you, Thrall!!!

Big hugs.........

Whippett
02-01-2008, 06:40 PM
such beauty and sadness - and joy as well - wrapped in a few words. you are an amazing woman thrall. you leave me breathless with the impact of your vision.