Maelstrom

[Rhabbi]

Something I threw together after looking at iron poet. thrall encouraged me to post it here. Please be kind.



A cascade of emotion
A torrent of desire
Bringing life to desolation
And a raging fire

Does life have to be pain
Can it not be always joy
A summer storm of rain
And some time with a toy

Knowing you brings rivers
And the maelstrom of whitewater
My life is full of shivers
And pleasure ever after

[thrall]

See, I knew that you had it in you after all.........lol

Its beautiful........

[twitch]

Wow, that's very good. I love the imagery.

[Rhabbi]

See, I knew that you had it in you after all.........lol

Its beautiful........

Thank you thrall, that means a lot.


Wow, that's very good. I love the imagery.

Nice of you to say so twitch. Thank you.

[snowflake]

WoW Rhabbi awesome poem...

Twitch was right i love the imagery as well

hugs
snow

[Rhabbi]

WoW Rhabbi awesome poem...

Twitch was right i love the imagery as well

hugs
snow

Thank you snow, nice to know I can write poems also.

[Whippett]

you can indeed write poems mate!