Burning for You

[~faerie~]

work in progress...let me know what you think. Thanks.

Bodies thrusting
Hot sweat
Touch me
I burn for You
Your lips are cruel
Your hands divine
You touch my soul
Like no other
I am so weak
In Your embrace
You overpower me
And take me again
Harder, faster
Deeper, more
Push me to my limits
Take Your pleasure in me
I am Yours
Body and soul

[Rhabbi]

Nice work Jade. I suppose it needs polishing, but do not know enough about poetry to say where. I do know I liked it.

[~faerie~]

Thanks, i'm glad you liked it.