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Baddbaddgirl
09-27-2007, 02:50 PM
You hesitate

i beg, Please!

You tie my hands above my head, and i am free....

You thrust,

Harder, and Harder and Harder

until i scream, "HARDER, HARDER, HARDER!"

i shatter

into a million pieces of tiny, blinding light

and i am free.

You say You don't want to break me.

i am afraid You wont.

If you are too scared of hurting me, You will.

You will.

Rhabbi
09-28-2007, 06:53 AM
Very nice poem. And it actually underlines the dilemma of all Doms.

~faerie~
10-02-2007, 10:42 PM
Beautiful!

segelgirl
10-03-2007, 07:07 AM
Exactly how I feel. Wonderful way of describing it!

violetgem
10-09-2007, 11:21 PM
that was really great. Thanks for sharing that!

nifkinz
10-11-2007, 09:08 AM
That was well written. Thanks for sharing!