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Polaris
10-01-2007, 05:35 AM
It was peculiar
to watch the ice-queen melt
while he weaved
a web of hoarfrost,

impermeable

as her insistence
to be the source
of the icy coldness
flaring around her.

Yet, it was him
who carried the storm-front
and it was her
who had slowly resolved

to be snow-blind.

Rhabbi
10-01-2007, 08:13 AM
Nice poem Polaris.

Polaris
10-02-2007, 02:21 AM
Thank you, glad you like it :)