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~faerie~
10-01-2007, 07:18 AM
Something dark inside me
Is eating at my soul
Piece by piece I’m bleeding
It's out of my control

It takes from who I am
It makes me hurt and weak
But all you know are lies
From untruths that I speak

It haunts my every dream
Even when I’m awake
Dying inside, but I can’t tell
Until it’s much too late

Emptiness inside me
That’s left from when it feeds
Makes me cold and alone
With all the doubt it seeds

I cut so that I bleed
The outside as within
Until the pain, it brings me back
Why is living such a sin?

Rhabbi
10-01-2007, 08:12 AM
This is so powerful Jade.

Baddbaddgirl
10-02-2007, 10:05 PM
Very deep. The purple lettering makes it seem like the words themselves are hiding in the shadows. Very good.