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~faerie~
10-01-2007, 11:25 PM
Touch me
Make me hot

I want you
Inside me deep

Give me more
Make me burn

Fuck me hard
Touch my soul

Give me ecstasy
Give me love

Rhabbi
10-02-2007, 06:45 AM
I can feel your passion Jade.

~faerie~
10-02-2007, 06:53 AM
Thank you for all of your wonderful comments on my poetry. They are appreciated.

Baddbaddgirl
10-02-2007, 10:12 PM
I like the symbolism between hard sex and love.. very nice. Sometimes really hard is the only way we feel good inside. great job!

~faerie~
10-02-2007, 10:25 PM
Thank you.