The Kiss

[~faerie~]

I feel your gaze upon me
And I turn around
Our eyes meet, feel the heat
I cannot make a sound

You slowly come toward me
Purpose in your stride
My heart beats fast, I’ll never last
Your hands fisted at your side

You are standing before me
A fire in your eyes
I cannot speak, I feel so weak
You have me hypnotized

My name you harshly whisper
As you crush me to your chest
Your arms are tight, they feel so right
Your love you have confessed

You push me away, then grab me back
You kiss me hard and deep
It touches my soul, I lose control
I shiver from what I reap

[Rhabbi]

I felt this as I read, great work Jade.

[Baddbaddgirl]

holy crap! reading this made me wet.. lol.. verrrrrry nice image.

The way the words flow together from one line to the next is amazing.. especially with multiple sentences. I have never been able to get that quite right with my writing.. always tweaking it somehow.

Your words are beautiful. You are beautiful. Great job.

[~faerie~]

Thank you for your wonderful compliment.

P.S. I still get wet when i read it. lol :)

[ThisYouWillDo]

Very nicely written. I enjoyed reading it