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twitch
11-04-2007, 10:20 PM
Very short poem... I don't even think it classifies. This is a bit of a re-write of an older poem I wrote that just popped into my head while I was getting ready for work. Criticize at your leisure as usual.

Behind a mask is where I'll stay
I'll never tell them that I'm not okay
I'll sit here quietly until that day
The day I'll die, and fade away

snowflake
11-05-2007, 08:11 AM
HUn you will never fade away.. No matter how hard you try.. There will always be a few of us that will never let go...

huggles
snowflake

~faerie~
11-05-2007, 08:16 AM
you brought tears to my eyes. *hugs* sweetie