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snowflake
11-12-2007, 08:08 PM
The Hurt

This is my life, the one i picked,
But as of late, it only makes me sick.

Yes i will run, so very soon,
but this i'm afraid,
will be my doom.

With no place to run ,
no place to hide,
very soon, i will die.

The hurt and the pain, i can endure no more,
The threat of more loss, lets the grief soar.

What did i do, where did i go wrong,
I have tried my hardest, to stay strong.

But strength i have , this no more.
My heart bleeds, as it is tore.

hugs
snowflake

twitch
11-12-2007, 10:20 PM
Aww. *HUGS*

This is very well written, and really communicates the pain you're feeling. :(

Keep strong, snow, we're here for you.

MrDom
11-13-2007, 04:09 AM
kiss on the cheek and hugs


MrDom

Birdy
11-15-2007, 05:12 AM
That was beautifully written, rember snow we all love you huggs.

sub-butterfly
01-13-2008, 04:07 PM
snow i love you hun and i am always here for you. keep strong cos i know you are

butterfly
xxx

The Tester`
01-22-2008, 08:21 AM
beautifully written at a rough time.

Love you pet. Your the best.