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Leahsworm
11-14-2007, 08:20 AM
Here is a Stephen Stills song that i reworded
Leahsworm
11-14-2007, 08:29 AM
If you're down and confused
And you don't remember who you last abused, Concentration slip away
'Cause your slave is so far away
{Refrain}
Well, there's a whip in a fisted glove
And the whip lands with a thud
And if you can't beat the one you love, honey
Love the one you whip(4X)
Don't be angry, don't be sad
Don't sit cryin' over good times you've had
There's a girl right next to you
And she's just waiting to be beaten by you.
{Refrain}
Do do do do do do do do, do do do do do do do do
Do do do do do do do do, do do do, do do do
Love the one you whip (3X)
Turn your heartache right into your joy
She's a girl, and your toy
Get it together make it nice
Ain't gonna need anymore advice
Isabelle90
11-14-2007, 09:17 AM
I'll never sing that song the "right" way again!!!
Leahsworm, your lyrics are much more appropriate IMO. :rolleyes:
Ozme52
11-14-2007, 01:04 PM
For those of us who are audio challenged... what's the song?
That way I can go listen to the melody.
Love the one you whip (3X)
just isn't enough to recollect the whole song and by itself, it's just a mind-worm in my head. LOL
Isabelle90
11-14-2007, 05:14 PM
For those of us who are audio challenged... what's the song?
That way I can go listen to the melody.
just isn't enough to recollect the whole song and by itself, it's just a mind-worm in my head. LOL
Are you serious, Oz? The original song is Love the One You're With.
There's a Rose
In a fisted Glove
And the eagle flies with the dove
And if you can't be with the one you love
It's alright
Go ahead and love the one, love the one, love the one your with
Love the one, love the one, love the one your with
If your guy can't come to you
And you don't remember who your talking to
Your concentration slips away
Because your baby, she is so so far away
Chorus: And there's a rose in a fisted glove
And the eagle flies with the dove
And if you cant be with the one you love
Love the one your with
Don't be angry
Don't be sad
Don't sit cryin' for good times you had
There's a girl right next to you
And she's waiting for something to do
Chorus
Do it
Do it
Do it
Turn your heartache into joy
She's a girl and your a boy
Get together, make it tonight,
You ain't gonna need no more advice
Chorus
Just love the one your with
Crosby, Stills, and Nash.....ringing any bells yet?
Leahsworm
11-15-2007, 10:25 AM
Thanks!! I like to change song lyrics. This song just came to me one day .
gagged_Louise
11-15-2007, 06:13 PM
Here is the sadist...
This one's first for Tom and Logic and other countrymen here, but I'm offering an English version as well.. The original is a well-known Swedish nursery rhyme/song to teach kids not to run out into the street traffic:
Här är sadisten som mitt i gatan står
som river upp små sår
och piskar dina lår
Ibland hörs ett "Nej!" men inte släpps hon fri
Det är i alla fall hans melodi
spank, spank,spank, spank, spank, spank, spank, spank, spank!
Here is the sadist in the middle of the street
All tying up your feet
and whipping you so sweet
Sometimes we hear a "NO!" but that won't set her free
In any case, that's just his melody
spank, spank,spank, spank, spank, spank, spank, spank, spank!
Original:
Här är polisen som mitt i gatan står,
han visar hur man kör, han visar hur man går.
Ibland blir det stopp och då är gatan fri,
då kilar alla bilarna så kvickt förbi.
Tut, tut, tut, tut, tut,
tut, tut, tut, tut.
Here's the policeman standing in mid the street
To show us when to drive
and show us when to walk
Now he'll sign Stop! and hey, the road is free
then all the cars will buzz on so merrily.
Hoot, hoot , hoot, hoot, hoot ,
hoot, hoot, hoot, hoot!
goalt
11-16-2007, 12:39 PM
Not all songs need to be changed:
Some of them want to use you
Some of them want to be used by you
Some of them want to abuse you
Some of them want to be abused
I don't remember the title/artist.
gagged_Louise
11-16-2007, 05:45 PM
that's Eurythmics - Sweet Dreams Are Made Of This
Annie Lennox indeed is a super sexy artist, and a very good singer
Isabelle90
11-16-2007, 05:51 PM
that's Eurythmics - Sweet Dreams Are Made Of This
Annie Lennox indeed is a super sexy artist, and a very good singer
And, Marilyn Manson did a remake that was pretty hot too!
Ozme52
11-17-2007, 03:37 AM
Not all songs need to be changed:
Some of them want to use you
Some of them want to be used by you
Some of them want to abuse you
Some of them want to be abused
I don't remember the title/artist.
that's Eurythmics - Sweet Dreams Are Made Of This
Annie Lennox indeed is a super sexy artist, and a very good singer
An old standby of mine when the local munch group insists on kareoke night.
It's a great song to scene by. I find the cadence to be perfect for spanking!!
gagged_Louise
11-17-2007, 03:40 AM
Thought Sexcrime was going to be even better for spanking ;)