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snowflake
11-24-2007, 11:49 PM
The Bite
By: snowflake

i feel your arms wrap around my waist,
i feel your breath as you come in for a taste.
i feel your teeth so sharp as they begin to bite,
My thoughts and mind swirl and lose all site.

i melt into your arms so gentle and warm,
but they begin to tighten as me they swarm.
You bite down harder and i try to pull away,
i feel weak as the blood flows your way.

The taste you have yearned for so long,
i know feeling you this can't be wrong.
You kiss me gentle and whisper in my ear,
You are now mine and you shall never fear.

WyldWyl
11-25-2007, 04:32 AM
beautiful. just beautiful, little one.

freedom37803
11-25-2007, 06:19 PM
very well done...beautifully written

Playfulsub
11-25-2007, 07:25 PM
Lovely. :-)

fallenstar
11-26-2007, 01:14 PM
i love it snow...

Logic1
11-26-2007, 03:32 PM
lovely snow.
you do write lovely poetry :)

snowflake
11-28-2007, 10:29 AM
Thank you for the replies.. all so very warm to my heart .. iam so glad you enjoyed

hugs
snowflake

sub-butterfly
01-13-2008, 04:27 PM
absolutely beautiful, heart wrenching hun

~faerie~
03-04-2008, 08:01 AM
i like it very much