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thrall
11-28-2007, 08:31 PM
Glimmers of light
Reflections in time
Burn for me
So I may still see
Burn brightly
For the time may have come
The core will bounce
Brilliance in the nova
Death of the star
Death of the light
To become once more
A whisper in the darkness
Pertez
12-04-2007, 10:59 AM
Beautiful Thank you
thrall
12-05-2007, 11:18 AM
thank you both........
Playfulsub
12-16-2007, 02:41 PM
This is lovely. Beautiful imagery.:-)
Whippett
01-10-2008, 04:02 PM
you leave me speechless - thank you
snowflake
01-11-2008, 09:00 AM
Thankyou hun.. beautifully done
hugs
snow
TomOfSweden
01-11-2008, 10:25 AM
You're a star. If I'm to whine about something it would be the line "So I may still see". It didn't really fit. It's a bit too informative rather than talking to my heart. You have an amazing talent for this. It can't be stressed enough.
thrall
01-11-2008, 10:41 AM
You're a star. If I'm to whine about something it would be the line "So I may still see". It didn't really fit. It's a bit too informative rather than talking to my heart. You have an amazing talent for this. It can't be stressed enough.
lol.........
So I may still see.........
it means the i want to still see and feel the world.......all that i love....once i am gone........
I want the stars to burn brightly enough to.......follow me......
Whippett
02-01-2008, 06:42 PM
I've come back to this over and over thrall - it's a captivating image - out of the darkness comes - light