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snowflake
01-13-2008, 10:29 AM
This is my first attempt to a ballod.. done to Amazing grace


Our Love

by snowflake

The love we share so deep and strong,
grows each moment of the day,
and in my heart for you i will long,
and never fade away.

We feel each others pain and fears,
through storms we can not avoid.
But through it all we wipe our tears,
and our love has never foiled.

hugs
snow

sub-butterfly
01-13-2008, 11:09 AM
aw hun thats lovely, really works with the song as well. well done!!!!

thrall
01-13-2008, 02:48 PM
beautiful.........thank you

thrall

WyldWyl
01-13-2008, 05:03 PM
Beautiful, and brilliant.

Logic1
01-15-2008, 08:18 AM
snowflake the poet strikes again :)

Wordsmith
01-15-2008, 08:41 AM
*applauds* very nice

The Tester`
01-22-2008, 08:07 AM
That is a very nice ballad Snow ... I know you worked hard on it... Your very talented and it shows... Thanks and thanks given...

snowflake
01-25-2008, 12:13 AM
Thankyou all .. i was very nervous about posting this ..

hugs
snow

fallenstar
01-25-2008, 08:02 PM
your amazing.