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thrall
02-07-2008, 03:16 PM
Speak not to me
Of voyage end
We travel to the horizon
Were glimmering water
Meets shimmering sky
Forever without end
Lost are those
Who reach the bend
Stand alone and gaze at the horizon
snowflake
02-08-2008, 04:17 PM
Very beautiful hun .. thank you
hugs
snow
Whippett
02-14-2008, 03:58 PM
I think I need to take you sailing one day, thrall - away from sight of land, where the shore is a distant memory and all that remain are sea and sky and tiny rocking boat caught between them - so fragile and so strong - where the horizon drops away to mist no matter where you look...
ThisYouWillDo
02-15-2008, 05:26 AM
I think that's a beautiful poem, Thrall.
TYWD
Warbaby1943
02-15-2008, 05:34 AM
Nice as usual.
craven
07-04-2008, 10:49 AM
food for the soul, you paint pictures with words emotions for brushes our feelings your canvas
Friday
07-04-2008, 10:52 AM
Second stanza, first line. Did you mean "were" or "where"?
Other than that your imagery is fantastic :)