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sonali
02-20-2008, 12:04 PM
I quite like this.

thank you lilangel

heres some more words

I wake up every morning
To find the bed beside me empty
I come home every night
To find it cold, lonely

Your CDs on the shelf
Your clothes in my cupboard
Your picture on the table
Your shoes under the bed.

Now you’re gone
Taking a part of me
And I cry
Into the lonely night.

I hug your picture
Hold it close to me
My arms around your pillow
Wishing it were you

I walk by the sea
By our rocks, our beach
I lie by the fire
But now it’s only me.

Your books on the desk
Your razor by the basin
Your socks among mine
Fresh from the laundry

When my feet get cold at night
There’s nothing to warm them
There’s no shoulder to cry on
No arms to hold me close.

Now you’re gone
Taking a part of me
And I cry
Into the lonely night.

I watch movies alone
Just half a tub of popcorn
And there are things I don’t cook
Cause they remind me of you

Your smell still on the sheets
Your perfume in the air
The mail that still comes for you
Your name on the door.

When my back hurts
There’s no massage waiting
When it’s cold
There’s no hot bath waiting

Now you’re gone
Taking a part of me
And I cry
Into the lonely night.

I now need a chair
To reach things on the top
Cause you’re not there anymore
To reach up and get them for me.

And the left over batter
Still stuck to the dish
There’s no one anymore
To lick it.

You’re mother still calls
Your golf magazine still comes
Your band has broken up
Now that you’re gone.

I can never let you go
Cannot live without you
Each day, each night is a battle
I’m surviving, just barely

Now you’re gone
Taking a part of me
And I cry
Into the lonely night.

Warbaby1943
02-20-2008, 12:08 PM
Beautiful words it makes one feel the pain.

slaveangel{HM}
02-21-2008, 12:09 AM
I decided to take this out of the "Lonely Nights" thread you posted sonali, and put it up in a post of its own. This too is a beautiful poem and should be acknowledged as one.

If you have a title for this poem above, please let me know and I can edit the thread title for you.

angel xx

sonali
02-21-2008, 12:35 AM
@lilangel
it was hard for me to find a title for those words...what i got at was "You're Gone"
but then i was not satisfied by that hence i added it in the already existing thread...
thank you for making it a new thread...
i wish if you or others may suggest some suitable title for this...

slaveangel{HM}
02-21-2008, 07:08 AM
gotcha! Yep that is suitable.

Pertez
02-21-2008, 11:10 AM
Wonderfull !! Thank you Sonali