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twitch
03-15-2008, 06:38 AM
First, yes I know it lacks substance, and any real explaination... However, this is what I wrote when I was growing happier and more hyper...

A light piercing the dark from afar
A pearly white door left inches ajar
The boy looks up and stands from the floor
A sensation once lost, he feels warm once more
Does he dare to again let himself feel
Does he finally let himself begin to heal
The boy doesn't wish to be cold anymore
So he walks unsteadily over, and opens the door

Warbaby1943
03-15-2008, 07:26 AM
Thank you

Baddbaddgirl
03-17-2008, 10:55 PM
very nice =)

snowflake
05-23-2008, 10:24 AM
Wish the dorr was still open..since you ahve shut it again..

Very beautiful twitch..

hugs
snow