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denuseri
05-19-2008, 07:28 AM
the raised scars of heart and flesh
all undone with passions passing
lay i now my hair unkempt

chained and free still gasping
his hands so strong so hard
his lips rough upon my memory

gaze i out from my husk
eyes watching him possess me
his and his alone i yield

become not me nor i but his
gone forever now to serve this love
gone with all the tears

TheDeSade
05-19-2008, 08:27 PM
Very good. THanks for sharing

~faerie~
05-19-2008, 11:00 PM
Wow sis, that was so beautiful. *hugs and OMK's*

michaela1 (Sa)
05-20-2008, 08:50 AM
thank you for sharing that with us denu

denuseri
07-03-2008, 04:30 PM
thanks all, its kinda the way i feel as i come back from sub space

snowflake
07-05-2008, 07:58 AM
purrrs softly very nice hun


hugs
snow

violett
08-14-2008, 12:09 PM
having read that i want to experience it too - nice one hun *hugs*

kinkygirl
08-14-2008, 03:35 PM
beautiful.........just beautiful *smiles*

craven
09-14-2008, 05:54 AM
mmmmmmmm thanks den, i like this one a lot i can sense how personal it is, thanks for letting me see it mmmmm yes

manda
09-22-2008, 05:50 PM
TY for sharing your personal feelings -it is beautifully written