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Hiro Protagonist
06-03-2008, 05:25 PM
Red buttocks glowing
crimson like the rising sun
whimpering she squirms

TheDeSade
06-03-2008, 07:04 PM
very nice

gagged_Louise
06-05-2008, 11:12 PM
Nice! This is from a kind of "chain haiku" which me and Liz were doodling about with over several days - there's also one or two here by Clevernick's hand - using the final line of one as the start for the next attempt. Each of the verses are by just one of us, but let's leave to anyone guessing, if it matters. who did what... Hope you like it, especially the implied genderbending element.


Upper limits near -
bound, silenced she'll go higher
pushed by her Master


Pushed by her Master
Juices continue to flow
Emminating scent

Eminating scent,
lipstick, laced leather, cock bound,
kneeling, she offers...

Kneeling, she offers
Her mouth wide open, drooling
Anticipating....

Anticipating
Him plunging deep, her shoulders
shaking, swallowing...

Shaking, swallowing
Hot seed spilling over her
Humiliated....

Humiliated
and needy, His slave woman
cleans His cock, throbbing...

Cleans his cock, throbbing
in the moment, moist panties
over her bound crotch

Over her bound crotch
Cold scissors....material
Snip, now she's naked

Snip, now she's naked
blushes, grunts as her Master
shaves black, tousled hair

Shaves black. tousled hair
off the wedged-in sack - He smiles
how she's throbbing, bound...

How she's throbbing, bound
shaft steadily pumped, rutting:
pinioned and changing

Pinioned and changing
Transforming, no longer shy
Submission is strength

Submission is strength
courage to give, stretch, kneeling
naked and silenced

~

Brave enduring girl
Hung by her wrists; reddened crotch
grinds in tight black skirt

Grinds in tight black skirt
thighs steaming with sweat, knowing
she has sold herself

She has sold herself
Utter humiliation
Wetter than ever

Wetter than ever
stuffed close inside the cage
bound sisters squirming

Bound sisters squirming
breasts chained tight, shuttered crate
lowered into ship

Lowered into ship
Dark cage shaking as sisters
hear engines rumble

Hear engines rumble
Rolling back and forth....cargo
Stored and forgotten.

Stored and forgotten
bodies touching in the dark
Waves thrashing outside

Hiro Protagonist
06-06-2008, 04:18 AM
I have not seen chain haiku before..... kinda cool. Thanks!

lizeskimo
06-09-2008, 03:52 AM
Very nice Hiro Protagonist.Thanks for sharing. Oh, and do join in a chain haiku....even start one yourself! *smiles*