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craven
07-04-2008, 12:03 PM
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Devoid of light
The silence stretches thin
Limpid pools of faceless souls
Sulphurous fumes spew
Death’s haunting smile
His breathless wheeze
Intoxicates & asphyxiates
Flesh consumed

He salivates

thrall
07-04-2008, 12:17 PM
WOW.....

very very good imagery!