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craven
07-04-2008, 04:04 PM
Please

Defenseless & naked

Breathless, pulse racing
Heartbeat pounding

Tasting expectation I wait
My bonds restraining

Blinded, senses straining
Punishment craved

Presence felt, power smelt
My soul craving
The sweet kiss of the first welt

thrall
07-04-2008, 04:23 PM
mmmm.........my soul craving.....


beautiful.....thank you

Friday
07-04-2008, 11:24 PM
See now what do you need my help for when you create something like this with no outside influence?

Not to repeat the poem but; breathtaking.

snowflake
07-05-2008, 06:15 AM
purrrs softly remembering that feeling and melts.. Thank you craven very nice ...

hugs
snow

denuseri
07-05-2008, 11:46 PM
sweetness that was good,, huggels