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craven
07-05-2008, 09:02 AM
Breathe

Exhaled breaths hang in the winter’s air
Momentary wisps of dreams & despair

Lost to the sun’s warm embrace

Temporal reminders
Soon faded without trace

Friday
07-05-2008, 09:33 AM
Yes
but you knew that

thrall
07-05-2008, 10:24 AM
very good!.........i love the feel of this

thank you........for the kind complement.......hugs