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violett
08-02-2008, 08:01 PM
II wandered lonely in a crowded place
My jumbled mind needed some space
Confusion reigned – a decision to make
Looking so self assured – and feeling so fake

I have this need – an urge to belong
But this society, makes out it’s wrong
He took my hands and bound them with twine
Looked into my eyes and growled – You’re mine

So now I am His – His collar I wear
What others think – so little I care
Although in his chains I feel so free
Alive and vital and proud to be me

snowflake
08-02-2008, 08:05 PM
Very awesome post hun..

Thanks you so much for sharing

hugs
snow

violett
08-02-2008, 09:15 PM
thanks snow hun

JaDeDLoVe
08-03-2008, 12:47 AM
i love it vi thank u!

DiablosPet
08-03-2008, 01:13 AM
I got chills reading that! Beautifully put<3

-DP

violett
08-03-2008, 03:37 AM
Thanks JaDed & Diablo's Pet - your comments mean a lot

Tiler
08-03-2008, 08:43 AM
some post that vi..... keep it up

violett
08-03-2008, 09:59 AM
Thanks tiler - I'll do my best

Stealth694
08-03-2008, 10:13 AM
A simple verse, but so accurate and telling.

violett
08-05-2008, 03:40 PM
thanks stealth :)

SubmissiveDoll
09-16-2008, 02:31 AM
This is so beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing it.

denuseri
09-16-2008, 09:29 AM
love it sisa,,it rings so true

craven
09-16-2008, 12:42 PM
mmm nice work ,yes i like it vi

Kuskovian
09-18-2008, 03:37 PM
Wellcome back to your submission little one.

manda
09-22-2008, 06:02 PM
You give me hope, Ty for a wonderful poem and for sharing your journey.

kimmiekitten
10-03-2008, 12:53 PM
I love your poems, I can always relate and they really make me think, *hugs* stay fabulous xxx

Michael7792
11-13-2008, 08:54 PM
Great poem Vi :)

Birdy
11-14-2008, 04:50 PM
So true vi, loved the poem.

Spyder
12-16-2008, 08:35 AM
Simply beautiful!