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violett
08-12-2008, 12:29 PM
Eyes commanding
Voice demanding
Surrender complete and whole
Lashes teaching
Pain reaching
Deep into body and soul
Submissively kneeling
Openly feeling
Helplessly out of control
No more shielding
Totally yielding
Master – you I extol
Ozme52
08-12-2008, 04:11 PM
Okay, That rocks!!
Kuskovian
08-12-2008, 04:58 PM
Told you your a natural submissive. LOL. Thank you I will tell her of this. Very nice.
denuseri
08-12-2008, 10:39 PM
OOO nice one sis/maam, i love it
violett
08-13-2008, 12:25 AM
Told you your a natural submissive. LOL. Thank you I will tell her of this. Very nice.
that would be the switch part of me and a LOT of imagination lol
craven
08-14-2008, 05:34 PM
very good, though still not fully admitting things I see *smiles* great poem
violett
08-15-2008, 11:42 AM
very good, though still not fully admitting things I see *smiles* great poem
Thanks but there's nothing to admit too *winks*
thrall
08-15-2008, 06:53 PM
very good!...thank you for sharing