silent dreams

[violett]

Help me surrender
To the feelings within
Help me admit
To the pain I am in
That by living a lie
I hurt only me
And by opening up
I can only be free

Force me to submit
And confess I was wrong
Force me to acknowledge
That I’m not so strong
And by giving my trust
I am not being weak
In accepting the truth
Find the answer I seek

[Kuskovian]

Very well wrought, excellent. You have rare talent for this prose. I will enjoy reading future poems by you.

[denuseri]

WOW OMG i love it that so rocked boo

[craven]

mmmm yes very good Vi, very good and er poignant *grins*

[violett]

Very well wrought, excellent. You have rare talent for this prose. I will enjoy reading future poems by you.


Thank you - I shall enjoy writing more