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craven
09-04-2008, 12:30 AM
Chasing Rainbows


Stuttering, the flame clings to life
Hearts bleeding, our love dying
Flaming desires now extinguished
Withering, in the soulless shadows
Hot steel wrought soft flesh
Corroding, eaten from within

Forlorn, our treasure again eluding
Faithless we stand alone in sorrow

Tasting the sadness of rainbows end

rosebud
09-05-2008, 08:46 PM
Hi hun...liked this alot, very nice! read it at least a dozen times so far! Wonderful! *Hugs*

Heels62
09-05-2008, 10:55 PM
That is really Beautyfull Thanks

AndreaDawne
11-04-2008, 08:47 PM
This one is also beautiful! I am glad I met you! Hehe so I could read some of your poems.

Skyybird
11-09-2008, 04:17 PM
Corroding, Eaten from within...

I love this line xx