The Wall

[violett]

The Wall



Safe behind the walls
Impenetrable, solid
The foundations so deep
Laid by sorrow and betrayal
Rejection and pain

The protecting wall
Completely surrounding
Stones tower high and wide
Secured by experience
Loneliness and hurt

The wall face reflecting,
Protecting. Rejecting
All who try to reach in
Polished by dejection
Suffering and heartache

Back against the wall
Trapping, confining
Becoming a prison
Dark and cold
Fight or flight?

The wall breached
Open, exposed
He stands before me
Commanding Demanding
Acceptance of him

The wall crumbles
Defenceless, unarmed
Surrendering to him
Completely, utterly
Possessed and owned

[mighty_marc]

I always appreciate pieces of art. Thank's for sharing it, I have enjoyed reading it enormously. It does however seem that people associate very different things with walls, as I have for example also used this metaphor when when having written my introduction to this site, but in a totally positive was.
But be it as it may, I am glad that your wall crumbles in the end; may the wall you have got in your dom, the one against which you can lean never crumble though

[nippnuzzler]

harsh against her satin skin
the bricks stand high, just her within
dark and lonely every day
safe against hurt she shall stay

slowly though the wall did break
but still she thought he was a fake
tested, asked him lots to know
honest answers suprised her so

then as the bricks began to fall
she spoke with him, one telephone call
the voice brought home inside her head
her need to serve and to be led

down the path to total gift
through the rubble He will sift
to find her and then to grasp
her wholly, completely as she does gasp

for breath and thanks that He did come
and take her from that virtual tomb
back to life, its thrills and laughs
some smooth some rocky, different paths

sweet violet, the fiery dragon
tamed and sated by just One
the One who wrote her silly prose
why? who cares? god only knows

as to the future we do peek
I do so like her terrible cheek
opportunities for Him to spank
violet kneeling she offers thanks

Master she says, thank you so
it means much more than you do know
no violet that is not the case
now stand and show your smiley face

[violett]

I always appreciate pieces of art. Thank's for sharing it, I have enjoyed reading it enormously. It does however seem that people associate very different things with walls, as I have for example also used this metaphor when when having written my introduction to this site, but in a totally positive was.
But be it as it may, I am glad that your wall crumbles in the end; may the wall you have got in your dom, the one against which you can lean never crumble though


thank you very much for your comments - my dom is indeed special and I am learning to lean against him

[suchaminx]

vi and Dragontamer

what can I say - absolutely beautiful and so both of you

love and hugs

minxy xx