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SUBtly_shy
09-19-2008, 09:07 PM
Bliss

Eyes of green
Tears of blue
Look at me
Stare at you

Fire and Ice
Pain and regret
Into the shadows
Forgotten I do whirl

Stifled by the deafening stillness
Oh how my essence cries for you
Not a word passes my lips
As I lose myself again
In the shadows of forgotten bliss

craven
09-20-2008, 01:55 AM
mmmm yes i like it, very good, not sure you need any help from me at all, you have a gift it is clear to see thanks for letting us read your thoughts