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SubmissiveDoll
09-24-2008, 09:29 PM
Hold me, hurt me, pull me, guide me.
Tell me where I should be.
Cast Your gaze upon me,
So that I may remember.
My body, my mind, my heart.
They all belong to You.
Speak to me Your sweet words,
So that I may remember.
Love me, cuddle me, caress me.
Place me where You will have me.
Run Your hands across my body,
So that I may remember.
Teach me, discipline me, spank me.
Give me rules and structure.
Show Your disappointment and Your pride,
So that I may remember.
I give to You all that I am.
My service, my love, my obediance.
I need You, in all ways, to remind me,
That I'll always belong to You.

IAmCanadian
09-25-2008, 08:35 AM
Nice work. Great time to use repetition in a poem, considering the topic.

- FS

SubmissiveDoll
09-25-2008, 06:27 PM
Thank you very much.

manda
09-29-2008, 08:05 PM
I liked it --direct and simply stated --your meaning is very clear. Thank you.