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J-Go
09-25-2008, 02:22 PM
In body bound you take my pain
Running, dripping submissive rain
Mind to seek an altered place
Finding peace in soft sub space

Flog it brings loose fingered pings
Crop with welts the body stings
Cane my Pet to make you reel
Belt and hand my force you feel

Flowing pain, emotion twine
Submitted love that makes you mine

SubmissiveDoll
09-25-2008, 06:33 PM
I love this, it was wonderful to read. Thanks for sharing it.

meeker
09-25-2008, 10:42 PM
Very beautiful!!

manda
09-29-2008, 08:10 PM
Great poem --full of expresion --thank you for making me feel what you have written.

jeanne
11-14-2008, 06:18 AM
Nice, J. Thanks!

craven
11-16-2008, 05:58 AM
mmm yes, wonderful i liked it a lot, thanks for posting J

dewran59
11-17-2008, 04:22 AM
mmmm...it's wonderful! thanks for sharing.