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violett
09-27-2008, 02:12 PM
Are you Strong enough?
Are you strong enough to take me?
Push me, hurt me, but not break me
Can you listen – feel my need?
Listen – hear me beg and plead
Will you smash my barrier down?
Watch me fight and pout and frown
Force me down and make me kneel
Open my eyes and let me feel
Punish me with a hand so firm
Yet soft and gentle, make me squirm
And then with kisses tender and light
Keep me safe throughout the night
Make my pulse race ever faster
If you can – I’ll call you master
Kuskovian
09-27-2008, 03:38 PM
Excellent little one. Well done indeed.
babygirl2320
09-27-2008, 03:53 PM
Are you Strong enough?
Are you strong enough to take me?
Push me, hurt me, but not break me
Can you listen – feel my need?
Listen – hear me beg and plead
Will you smash my barrier down?
Watch me fight and pout and frown
Force me down and make me kneel
Open my eyes and let me feel
Punish me with a hand so firm
Yet soft and gentle, make me squirm
And then with kisses tender and light
Keep me safe throughout the night
Make my pulse race ever faster
If you can – I’ll call you master
i love that did you write that?
denuseri
09-27-2008, 10:59 PM
Bueatiful sisa, just bueatiful
violett
09-28-2008, 12:53 AM
i love that did you write that?
Thank you babygirl yes I did write it
Tigoda
09-28-2008, 01:56 AM
very nice indeed
suchaminx
09-28-2008, 04:35 AM
WOW hun pretty powerful as well as beautiful
~HUGS~ minxy xx
nippnuzzler
09-28-2008, 07:57 AM
a weekend spent deep in thought is a weekend well spent v....its delightful!
Ozme52
09-28-2008, 03:51 PM
Well done Vi. Emotive.
damyanti
09-29-2008, 01:02 AM
You say it perfectly...so true and to the point, (at least for me). Simply, :wow_nbs:.
MacGuffin
09-29-2008, 02:04 AM
I like this very much. Aside from the fact it flows well it has that global meaning that can strike a chord in so many people. You get a house point for that one !
manda
09-29-2008, 07:57 PM
Wonderfully written!! Thanks for a great read -I love the pictures you put in my head.
Wind_Walker25
09-29-2008, 08:26 PM
I own a lil slut, she is strong of will, but I broke her, and she is mine!!!
jeanne
09-30-2008, 08:25 PM
Lovely, violett! Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
skp2bear
10-01-2008, 07:09 AM
It's so very beautiful Violett. This one wishes you and Master the very best.
Think thats a great way of summing things up well done violett
violett
10-04-2008, 12:55 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful and encouraging comments. Special thanks to my master Dragontamer who inspired it
Birdy
10-05-2008, 02:47 PM
What can I sayt vi that the others havent. Vi it was wonderful thankyou for sharing your thoughts
The Tester`
10-05-2008, 03:56 PM
Nice indeed Violett... Very well written... Makes the mind think... Thanks for posting it...
dewran59
10-06-2008, 04:08 AM
Very nice violett. Well written and i love it...Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
shayna{L_D}
10-06-2008, 06:37 AM
just another reason why i love you vi :)
craven
10-10-2008, 06:32 AM
mmmmmmm yes very good vi, i like it, very evocative