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craven
11-03-2008, 08:27 AM
Yours


Your kiss excites and gently caresses my soul

Exquisite, the pain of your beauty, heartfelt
Entranced, your captivating smile, I am drawn
Intoxicated, my senses reeling, overwhelmed

Freely I offer myself, my mind and body I give
Accepting my fate, all fear gone, in you I trust
Facing the future, revealed, my map unfolding

In surrender, liberation I find, freedom abound
My mind released, my being freed, peace at last

The incomplete whole, the missing piece found

AndreaDawne
11-04-2008, 08:52 PM
This is an interesting poem.

Skyybird
11-05-2008, 12:52 AM
You have captured the elusiveness of happiness nicely here. Thank you.

jezabel
11-05-2008, 02:26 AM
craven, this brought tears to my eyes, thank you for writing it, it's beautiful

jez xxx