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craven
11-03-2008, 09:09 AM
Domma

Chest heaving, vice like hands on me
Breathless, I kneel, my heart pounding
Sensing your presence, skin tingling
Tasting lust, I savour this yearning

Bound, my limbs aching, straining
Greedily I listen for your command
Hungry for your control, pleading
My soul writhing, contorted by desire

Savouring your honeyed voice, rapture
My flesh, anticipating punishment due
Hollow, my voice, as if from afar, begging
My being consumed, I live to serve you

DiablosLittleOne
11-03-2008, 04:35 PM
I get goosebumps any time I read your poetry. :)

lookingforsomething
11-04-2008, 01:50 AM
grins, punishment due huh??

jezabel
11-04-2008, 02:15 AM
Wow

shayna{L_D}
11-05-2008, 01:44 PM
woot woot for you craven!

rosebud
11-05-2008, 01:52 PM
Mmmmmm!! Tingles, all through my body!! Wonderful!

AndreaDawne
11-05-2008, 08:31 PM
Very well done with this one. I really like this. Just made me tingle all over as I read this.