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craven
12-19-2008, 04:51 PM
Eternal

On the shores of hope I stand alone
Weep for me, taste my sorrow and tears
As the sands of time wash over me
My love for you will last a thousand years


My spirit bleeds and my soul aches
Seeing with my minds eye, as night falls

Memories I treasure, your caress I yearn
Spellbound, your voice echoes in my mind


In the darkest times, and deepest night
You are with me, by my side always

Heart warming your radiant, evanescent light
Throughout my dreams and waking thoughts
Our love eternal, defiant, it burns bright

thrall
12-19-2008, 07:30 PM
i love this one craven..........

Skyybird
12-21-2008, 01:20 PM
Beautiful. Very lovely, I think this could be one of my favourites xx

damyanti
01-02-2009, 01:11 AM
This one is really something great. I love it.

tessa
01-02-2009, 06:46 AM
Hauntingly lovely

:wave:

violett
01-04-2009, 08:41 AM
I see you haven't lost your touch - very nice hun

jezabel
01-23-2009, 12:26 AM
beautiful huni, absolutely beautiful

lady kisa
02-03-2009, 09:56 AM
Craven-
I have to agree that this is my favorite poem of yours. Well done! your words touch me...
hugs
^.^

snowflake
02-03-2009, 11:45 AM
Very deep thank you craven my favorite of yours also..!!