You Take My Breath Away

[violett]

You Take My Breath Away

Your hand tightens around my throat
Softly, gently, firmly,
You look deeply into my eyes
And see nothing but love and trust

No fear
I do not fear anything you do
For any pain is for your pleasure
And your pleasure is my pleasure

You have taken my all
Every pore belongs to you
And now I totally depend on you
For even the breath to live

To you I opened my heart
My soul
Gave my body unreservedly
For you to use and abuse

And you took my heart
My soul
My body, and used and abused
But also cherished and loved

I wear my stripes with pride
The bruises linger lovingly
Caressing my tender flesh
No not mine - Your tender flesh.

For I belong to you
Each breath is your breath
The collar around my throat
Serves to remind me of that

As if I could ever forget
Your ownership is tattooed on my heart
Ingrained in my mind
Embedded in my soul

But I have not lost myself
Rather I have gained your strength
Your power
Your presence

I am still me but much more
For I know I am protected by you
Watched over by you
Cared for by you

And for that I thank you
Adore you
Rely on you
And most of all – love you

[dave]

wow! tiamat! That was sensational!!!
I hope your Dom know just how lucky he is to have a greatwoman like you.
dave

[suchaminx]

tiamat - don't think there are any words I can say that you don't already know

truely incredible

love and hugs minxy xx

[SAE]

Wow with feelings like that Dragontamer is one lucky dom lol

[jezabel]

thats beautiful huni
*hugs* jez xxx

[violett]

Thanks all for your kind comments - and if he didn't know how lucky he is to have me I'm sure he does now lol

[craven]

very nice, he is very lucky, as are you a good couple

[nippnuzzler]

lucky??? well, its a view I suppose! if only she could express her feelings more clearly...
he he

[violett]

lucky??? well, its a view I suppose! if only she could express her feelings more clearly...
he he


I hope I expressed my feeling clearly enough tonight master - no doubt I'll be bruised for days now and you certainly understood my needs fully

[suchaminx]

I hope I expressed my feeling clearly enough tonight master - no doubt I'll be bruised for days now and you certainly understood my needs fully

*smiles and hugs* So good to see you happy hun!!!

Ohhhhh and Dragontamer...... keeping her happy is in your job description :) ...........................*runs away giggling*

[BryansGrrrl]

Beautiful. :)

[Persaius]

Thanks for sharing that. It was great to read.

[damyanti]

very, very nice :)

[dewran59]

Wonderful!! Thank you...

[soft zero]

But I have not lost myself
Rather I have gained your strength
Your power
Your presence




I was just lucky enough to stumble on this thread. This part in particular is so powerful to me.

tiamat this is so beautifully written. Being able to express yourself like that. And I guess, being able to feel that deeply.

Wow...